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=Humanity paragraph= What I think it means to be human is that you are with your own personality. Humans are animals that have evolved into something amazing and we are all very different from one another. ‍Being human is looking alike on the inside and having every thing you should have and looking the same but with different faces. ‍ ‍There are some weird and crazy people out their that want to hurt other people in weird ways that normal people would never think of doing and thats the sad thing about some humans and how they think. ‍But there are tons of good people in the world like cops, they protect us and without them and other good people the world would fall apart.

Hi Josh,

You begin a good point but then you leave me hanging. Stay on a point and give me a specific example to support your point. You have run on sentence, keep you sentences short and to the point. Practice putting a period.

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Ms D'Angelo